January 5th, 2014, 12:28 pm

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onyxr January 5th, 2014, 12:45 pm

This was going to be at least a few more pages long originally but I really needed to do some fun pages so it got truncated a bit.
It wasn't important so it doesn't really matter that much, I guess the tone's a bit off what I wanted but oh well.
Anyways, yay for hitmonchan! I like tyrogue better than any of its evolutions but they aren't in this game so second best!
This was basically the first scene I thought up in my head for this comic. I really wanted to do this scene.

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Pyrophoricity January 5th, 2014, 1:07 pm

Love your story,
But ... uh i don't really get the last page ^^'

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Zelkova January 5th, 2014, 4:22 pm

This page is all over the place. If you don't mind some criticism you went from hitmonchan kicking ass to suddenly being hurt. While you do have the comic version of the "fade to black" effect it is still pretty confusing. How can a Pokemon so good become so beaten.

You explained so little. You did say that you were originally going to have more pages for this so I guess given that you were limited to a single page as a factor you did a pretty good job. Just know that this page did take a huge hit though because of it.

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Emme (Guest) January 5th, 2014, 5:12 pm

I think I can explain, it looks like the hitmonchan thinking back to training and it dominating others and then seeing that it is still swept by charlie and it goes after them possibly seeking to become stronger.