January 12th, 2014, 2:39 pm

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onyxr January 12th, 2014, 3:09 pm

Some of you have pointed out that the ending to last chapter was a bit confusing.
Looking back... yeah, I can see it. I can tell you it was a lot different from my original concept.
It was mostly due to just a crappy month, a desire to rush and admittedly some bad planning.
So I'm going to try to be more careful with this chapter, at least more careful than the last.
so next week I'll be focusing on planning, if I post it'll probably only be one page. Just a heads up.
And thanks to you who did point it out to me, don't bother hesitating to tell me when I mess up something,
It's more difficult for me to spot them since I already know what's going on.
Though it seems to be a general flaw of mine in other situation too...
Anyways, either way feel free rip this comic apart as long as it's legitimate criticisms!

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Mango Dolphin January 12th, 2014, 4:05 pm

Erm, the chapter is called Marsh, but in the thing it says March.

Just pointing out a typo, and good luck with the comics!

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Zelkova January 12th, 2014, 4:20 pm

I love those who can take criticism well. After using Deviantart for a short while I discovered that some people love to show off their artwork but if you even hint at a minor flaw then they will delete your comment then block you without saying a word. I think such users were using it as a photobucket but still wanted the ten seconds of fame that came with using the site. Anyway I now find myself not criticizing people as much as I should because of that.

Generally though your comic is well made and formatted. It was just that one Hitmonchan page that kinda confused me. Pretty good track record when looking at the comic as a whole.

I am still loving how you dealt with the Charmander line.

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onyxr January 12th, 2014, 5:05 pm

@Mango Dolphin: Oh, no, that was just a lame pun, it's an automatic reflex. That's a flaw I am sadly incapable of fixing! Thank you though!

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Scorpio750 January 26th, 2014, 11:02 pm

@Zelkova: which Charmander line?

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GreyWolf March 31st, 2015, 4:02 pm

I think Zelkova meant the thing with Charizard not being able to fly, how in this comic Charizard flies where as in the game it can't learn fly (EVEN THOUGH IT'S A FLYING TYPE! I MIGHT ADD!)